Could you share your text screenshots that were successful?

[Calibration]

Hey guys, I've posted a lot of threads relating to texting on this forum and some of you here know I suck at texting FML. Although they've tried their best to help me, I don't seem to grasp it. I've failed a lot due to bad texting. So could you share your text screenshots of interactions that were successful from opener to date?
I'm trying to follow Skills' texting guide and at some point during texting, I somehow still fuck up. I thought I should look at a few interactions so that I get an idea of what I'm doing wrong.

You can see one of my recent texts, if you're interested:
Post in thread 'Is LJBF end of game?'
https://www.skilledseducer.com/threads/is-ljbf-end-of-game.26005/post-147252

Or a shit load of them in my previous threads

 

[ProblemSolving]

Hey Shawn,

It's quicker for me to write out the texts than to screen shot and edit photos, so here it goes.

Cold approached this girl while I was working.

Me: Hey Meagan! This is PS. Save my number
Meagan: Saved! Hello
Me: How was the gym? (She was on her way to the gym when I approached her)
Meagan: Still here. But it's grand. Not too busy today. How was work? Or is
Me: Oh yeah Gold's Gym is open late. All finished Are you free after 5 tomorrow?
Meagan: I am. I generally leave the office around 5. So anytime after is good. Are we going for a drink or hot chocolate?

(Before getting her number I asked her if she wanted to get drinks or hot chocolate sometime)

Me: Ok perfect. Does hot chocolate at 7pm at the outdoor mall starbucks work for you?
Meagan: Sounds good! Looking forward to it
Me: Nice Have a good workout.
Meagan: Thaank you. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday

The next day.

Me: Hey Meagan on my way
Meagan: Perfect. I just got here.

Shawn, notice how before even asking for the number she already agreed that she was interested in meeting up with me for drinks or hot chocolate. That is the screening question. It's the reason most of the phone numbers I take are solid. I only take phone numbers from girls that have already agreed to something specific.

If she didn't want to hang out with me, she could have easily said she had a boyfriend or was busy or whatever excuse she wanted to use. If that happens, I take my leave and save my self from wasting time texting a girl whom has no desire to see me again.