Need feedback

[Bigjo]

A very raw version of the voice got some feedback and exercises from @Alpha13SC implemented them and here's a very raw version nothing special just a small speech "what if" from George Clooneys movie "out of sight"

Vocaroo | Online voice recorder

Vocaroo is a quick and easy way to share voice messages over the interwebs.

voca.ro

Thanks

 

[Just a Man]

Voice basics (pitch, tone) sound fine to me. I think you're trying to be a bit too 'actorly' on the recording so there are issues with pacing and emphasis, but I have a hunch you'd be better being yourself without a script, as those issues are less about voice itself and more about delivery of a script. Great actors get paid a lot to make scripts sound natural and wonderful, so don't confuse voice practice with acting practice. They're not the same.

 

[Searcher]

How do you get a deeper voice like George Clooney or Sean Connery?

When trying to sound deeper it comes off as cartoonish tone or a unenthusiastic bored /depressed tone.

Any specifics on how to actually get a deeper voice as in breath control where to sound from, etc?

 

[Just a Man]

How do you get a deeper voice like George Clooney or Sean Connery?

When trying to sound deeper it comes off as cartoonish tone or a unenthusiastic bored /depressed tone.

Any specifics on how to actually get a deeper voice as in breath control where to sound from, etc?

One of the better articles I've seen is here:

Here's How I Got a Deeper Voice (the 5 Best Techniques) – Vocular | How Deep is Your Voice?

If you came here from Google, you’ve probably already been through a heap of articles on how to get a deeper voice. The problem with these is, none of them seem to be written by people who are actually speaking from experience. With each point, you have no idea whether you’re getting tried and...

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